for those who love emotional free verse poetry.

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Sunday, 06-Jan-2008 2:48:20

Here is where I will most likely be writing a lot of my often depressing strange poetry and where others are quite welcome to write too.
Iyana

Post 2 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Sunday, 06-Jan-2008 2:53:35

When she dreams of flying,
When she opens her eyes,
She finds she can not fby,
She finds she is falling.
He looks through sightless eyes
On a world that is ending,
He looks through sightless eyes
On a face that has lost its beauty.
Somewhere within his soul
A flame kindles as the light dies,
And fed by her touch it spreads
And lights up the fading land,
And touches the last rays of sunset
To bring them in to light.
The sun, as it goes out
Feels the flame kindle its heart,
And with a burst of light it rises,
Blinds the sighted eyes,
Gives sight to the blind,
And gives life to those who have so little left.

to be continued

Post 3 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Sunday, 06-Jan-2008 3:26:52

Silence...
We live in silence
That speaks echoes
To the emptiness of our souls.
Silence...
We live in silence,
With the world raging on
In chaos around us.
Silence...
We live in silence,
And the silence is deafening,
And this world falls to ruin
In silence.
Because the noise is meaningless,
We live in silence.

Post 4 by louisa (move over school!) on Sunday, 06-Jan-2008 6:39:04

I like that, it's nice and interesting. What exactly is emotional free verse poetry? Not much of an expert on these things. Thanks

Post 5 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Sunday, 06-Jan-2008 6:59:18

Free verse is poetry with no style or rhyme or rhythm. and I write free verse poethy that is most often very emotional.

Post 6 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Sunday, 06-Jan-2008 13:23:36

I like it so far. very good

Post 7 by louisa (move over school!) on Sunday, 06-Jan-2008 14:03:02

ah, thanks, and as I said like it.

Post 8 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Monday, 07-Jan-2008 15:00:15

Got some interesting poetry and writings I would post on here if the cut and paste was working, here, let's try this... never mind it doesn't work. anyone can write in here.

Post 9 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Monday, 11-Feb-2008 15:10:53

Cool, nice one. I can see it.